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Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Question for all of my Super Smarts!

What word demonstrated the strongest word choice? How did it add to the quality of writing and reading enjoyment? Also include the page number and the sentence that the word can be found within. P.S. This is extra credit if posted with all the parts, name, and by 11/14!

6 comments:

  1. The word that demonstrated the strongest word choice to me is, "white washed blue eye's."On Pg 14 on the 14th sentence. to me I't added quality to the writing because it described the appearance of Jeremy's eye's.

    Theresa Felix
    Period 3

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  2. Thanks Theresa for such a descriptive comment!

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  3. One word(s) that demonstrated the strongest word choice would be "A PAINFUL tear slid down my cheek.." On page 116-third line down.. I thought that this was really good description, because i could tell that whatever the case was, she didn't like it. Cassie hated the moment and the fact that she explained it that well just made it sound even better, but worse.

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  4. Taylor sandoval
    Period 4

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  5. Anonymous12/13/2010

    hiiiiiii

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  6. Anonymous12/13/2010

    i agree with theresa...you smart person....jeje

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